Feedback

Supervisor has read my proposal & suggests:

• rewrite the introduction - Supervisor has attacked it and written five sentences that bring the argument together - why didn't I write like that?
• sort out month numbers with real dates - good idea, I didn't like the numbers anyhow.
• reconsider which life cycle model to use - yes - the one I'm using is perhaps too simple for the context
  
• I be less casual - whoops!
• also have to work out some points of clarity

Nevertheless, perhaps I have a "robust" research question. Yeah!