- rewrite the introduction - Supervisor has attacked it and written five sentences that bring the argument together - why didn't I write like that?
- sort out month numbers with real dates - good idea, I didn't like the numbers anyhow.
- reconsider which life cycle model to use - yes - the one I'm using is perhaps too simple for the context
- I be less casual - whoops!
- also have to work out some points of clarity
Sunday, 29 June 2008
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